Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Writing to Explore Final

The Ronald McDonald House's (RMHC) mission is to find or create programs that directly improves the health and well-being of children. In this mission they hold several core values that help the RMHC complete this mission.
  • Focusing on the critical needs of children.
  • Celebrating the diversity of the programs offered and the staff, volunteers and donors who help out.
  • Staying true to a 35 year heritage of being responsible stewardship.
  • Operating with accountability and transparency.

The House focuses on children espically, because in their vision if a childs life is changed or made better, the family well being is positivly effected. Because they focus on the children they strive to keep families together for treatment and rehabilitation. RMHC Houses have playrooms and private rooms for the children to stay in for as long as they are treated. The fees for the rooms ranges from $5 - $25 per room per night because of the many private donanations given around the world. No one is ever turned away from treatment. If a family is unable to pay, their fees are waived and care is given for free.

RMHC has donation boxes in every McDonalds along with the private and corporate donations they recieve. Everything from food and toy donations, to soda can tabs are accepted as donations. McDonalds has been the largest corporate donator for over 35 years and the in store donation boxes held in McDonalds are the largest donations to the RMHC. Even though McDonalds is the largest donator, the RMHC can not run solely on McDonalds contributions.

The RMHC asks the community to give and to help out in anyway that they can afford, whether that be money, time, or items any contribution is greatly appriciated

Thursday, July 9, 2009

Lang, Knowledge, Power

Language is used to convey ideas on a familiar medium for other people to recieve and comprehend. If ideas can be conveyed correctlly and inspirationally then those words gain more power for influence than by beating the listener to agree. The sword will force people to believe in something they have no heart for, but the inspiration from words, alters thinking patterns and aspires people to change and conform on their own accord. To do this a speaker must be very knowlegdgable and very articulate to pass on this knowledge to the listener. Their knowledge and language becomes anothers strength and power.

Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Experience Final Draft

Dear Eric Bishop,

Im writing to you to thank you for the zen-like example you had. Through ought the time you were my coach your leadership had pushed me to excel beyond that of my fellows. For your constantly improving my faults, and for teaching me to be a smarter player rather than a more skilled one. Your devotion to the team is something i will always carry with me everywhere I go in life, and it is a lesson that I too will try to impass to others.

Even when I've never met you your name was mentioned by all the Little League coaches and by current and former players. You were the titan in midst of the ants in these tales. I was anxious when fall had started because after the entire summer and winter I still had not seen your face, but the dominating presence over the other coaches and the players was something I had expected, but had not experienced and it overwhelmed me. I remember the end of the winter conditioning and the coaches told the players to sit in a circle and introduce themselves when called upon. Quiet I sat awaiting roll call and to gauge your reaction to me. I will never forget the first words we had spoken to each other.
"Steven......what are you a junior?" -he questioned
"No coach, only a freshman." -I calmly replied
"Huh, well no shit." -he said
Overjoyed, I couldn't help but smile. Had I impressed the great coach Bishop? Turns out I didn't impress him as much as I thought. Later I came to realize that I learned that to impress you actions would speak much louder than words.

It took all of freshman year to understand how you structured practices out on the baseball field, but once the flow was there the drills became somewhat second nature to me. Everything from ground hits around the infield to running situations for outfield hits. You taught me the plays, and the outcomes of almost every senario that baseball had to offer, something I had never begun to think about. To think ahead several plays and determine the best course of action in a second, those kind of skills do not leave a person, and even in life outside the diamond I exlempifed your tutelage and succeeded without much effort. Like playing a constant game of chess, always calculating and never resting.

By the time my sophomore year hit I was part of the team. I spent all freshman year sitting the bench over the other star catcher and I think I played a whole 6 innings the whole season. I was a little upset, but everyday in practice i had enjoyed learning new techniques and becoming that much closer to a spot. My second year I had to give up catching to play first base. I enjoyed first base more than I did catching, but learning the "inside scoop" all freshman year really helped. The beginning of the season though I had done something stupid and broke my hand. Again I sat the bench with no hope of playing all season. Most people would complain and be completly distrought at this, but strangely I just found enjoyment being on the field. I have partly you to blame for that, but mostly myself. You inspired me to stay on the team even though I couldn't contribute much to the team. That kind of dedication has always been with me.

You were the only person I hated to leave behind in baseball when I left. You were the light in the dark for me. Dealing with the thick-headedness and stubborness of the other players really began to drone on me. I had found a better life in running and I do not regret leaveing, but I sometimes wonder what else I could have learned from you if I had stayed. I feel there is nothing I can do to repay you for your lessons, but I suppose as being a teacher it is what you would have wanted. I can never thank you enough.

Chapter 5

While reading i thought to myself, most of these "writings" are reactivly thought out inside the mind rather than on paper. In secion 2 writing to explore life, the examples given I believe are those that people will just think about. Most of those I have met, adults included do not consistantly make a pros and cons list for everything in their lives. The act of writing and physically seeing your thoughts as your writing them proves time and time again to be more comprehensive than just quietly thinking them, again the time factor and practicality comes into play. People are just too busy. I did however enjoy reading of Dr. Tao and his prime number article and he is the truest example of years of writing classes, and commitment will eventually do to a career.

Genre and Design

1.
I would define this article as one that is revealing, but no more than need be. Blogs are ment to tell the story of what that person experienced. The interview, calling their friends, drinking a few beers its all part of what everyday normal people attend to and as such people can relate easily to the peice.

2.
I believe it became common when viewers began to leave huge ammounts of comments about how good the peice was and how good of a blogger they are. Because of the raised self esteem I think the bloggers began to reccomend other articles like their own so the readers are constantly intrested. The blogger gets more views, and the readers are happy -win win.

3.
I was intrested when the writer began to talk about how they called their family and friends. Its hard not to relate to someone who shows such excitement about landing a job.

4.
I wouldn't read more of this reader because it is their life, and I have my own. Im not the type of person to be gossipy and into everyones business even if they willingly offer it.

5.
I wouldn't include things such as crazy out of control parties/drug useage if there was any. Really leave out anything that is potentially incriminating by officals. Half naked pictures for the ladies may land them the job, but on a whole seperate set of circumstances that im sure the girl didn't want.

Chapter 3

This chapter i thought was a more in depth overview of the ending of chapter 2. Chapter 3 spoke mainly of making notes and rewriting important details. While these methods are useful, they are not practical. Every article cannot be disected so throughly and be expected to be done in a timely manner. I understand that the trick to it is to be able to disect the article as you read it and these steps prepare for that, but the reality is that most people already do this naturally and to build on skill that are already present in peoples reading patterns would only require more reading, not more work for the readings.

Chapter 2

This chaper spoke mainly of pinpointing main ideas and of quick comprehension. Skimming is a good method if your in a hurry, I even skimmed over this chaper to write this blog. Its a good method, but most of the non-important details are left to sketch. Annotation I don't much care for, but for book reports and critical questioning, annotationg helps me find the inner meanings in the stories. Its very time consuming, and quite frankly I usually dont have much time to write my papers.